Looking good. Since you're making this for threadless, a few points I think might improve it (and your sales):
Make the fox's head and neck slightly larger,
Try to make her face look prettier, I suggest giving shadows under the cheekbones and moving her lips down a tad.
Add some blue shadow under her hand where it's on the fur,
Her right arm (on our left) looks too thin and bent a bit. Maybe move the elbow in a bit and the hand upwards.
Rotate the whole thing a bit clockwise so that her head is directly above her feet.
Otherwise it's really cool. I like the repetition of circles throughout, on the fox, her hips, the moon and the whip.
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In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
Have a great time everyone and please fav this article so as many people can see the featured works. I would recommend seeing each one and faving them too.
Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it.
Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
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Make the fox's head and neck slightly larger,
Try to make her face look prettier, I suggest giving shadows under the cheekbones and moving her lips down a tad.
Add some blue shadow under her hand where it's on the fur,
Her right arm (on our left) looks too thin and bent a bit. Maybe move the elbow in a bit and the hand upwards.
Rotate the whole thing a bit clockwise so that her head is directly above her feet.
Otherwise it's really cool. I like the repetition of circles throughout, on the fox, her hips, the moon and the whip.
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Ask not what you can do for art, but what art can do for you.
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"Be regular and orderly in your life, that you may be violent and original in your work."
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